Love quartet (senryu)

Christina8

After I met you

the stars aligned in heaven

I found my true love

 

Those three longed for words

Were permanently spoken

On a winters night

 

My heart's forever

entwined together with you

I want you near me

 

My heart still quivers

when I look into your eyes

every night and day

  • Author: Christina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 6th, 2017 07:42
  • Comment from author about the poem: A senryu is about human nature and like a Haiku it has a rhyme scheme of 5 syllables/7 syllables/5 syllables. I looked up "entwined" and it counts as 2 syllables. I couldn't just write one so I wrote 4! And most importantly they cannot rhyme.
  • Category: Love
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Comments5

  • Michael Edwards

    So well thought out and written - nice one Christina

    • Christina8

      I appreciate your kind words--thank you!

    • HOODSTAR POET

      I'm a tad bit unorthodoxical when it comes to writing poetry for my lyrical-metaphoric-free-style but i like how you explained yourself at the end of your beautiful poem...i learned something!

      • Christina8

        Awesome! Thanks for the compliment!

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks for caring CHRIS a great quartet ! SENRYU 1. Stars S 2. Words S 3. A close Heart S 4. A quivering Heart ! What more could your lovely Hubby need ? Hugs BRIAN

        • Christina8

          Thanks so much for that lovely review! I appreciate it as always. Hugs-Christina

        • WriteBeLight

          Lovely Christina!

        • Tony36

          Well written and expressed Great write

          • Christina8

            Thanks so much Tony!

            • Tony36

              Welcome



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