After I met you
the stars aligned in heaven
I found my true love
Those three longed for words
Were permanently spoken
On a winters night
My heart's forever
entwined together with you
I want you near me
My heart still quivers
when I look into your eyes
every night and day
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A senryu is about human nature and like a Haiku it has a rhyme scheme of 5 syllables/7 syllables/5 syllables. I looked up "entwined" and it counts as 2 syllables. I couldn't just write one so I wrote 4! And most importantly they cannot rhyme.
- Category: Love
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Comments5
So well thought out and written - nice one Christina
I appreciate your kind words--thank you!
I'm a tad bit unorthodoxical when it comes to writing poetry for my lyrical-metaphoric-free-style but i like how you explained yourself at the end of your beautiful poem...i learned something!
Awesome! Thanks for the compliment!
Thanks for caring CHRIS a great quartet ! SENRYU 1. Stars S 2. Words S 3. A close Heart S 4. A quivering Heart ! What more could your lovely Hubby need ? Hugs BRIAN
Thanks so much for that lovely review! I appreciate it as always. Hugs-Christina
Lovely Christina!
Thanks WBL!
Well written and expressed Great write
Thanks so much Tony!
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