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Michael Edwards

INSIDE OUTSIDE

 

 

He wore his jumper inside out

and he thought it made him look thin.

But when they assured him it made him look stout

he wore outside in.

 

 

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 7th, 2017 00:35
  • Comment from author about the poem: A profound offering for today plus one of my local village scenes
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments6

  • willyweed

    and the moral is he wanted to look skinning,. lovely picture Michael. you paint Michael WW

  • Tony36

    LOL! Love it, Awesome painting

  • WriteBeLight

    Loved it. Painting too.

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Thanks MICHEAL ~ Great picture and a great comic poem ! I knew a man who wore a VEST to keep the coldness off his CHEST ~ Weather in the EAST's a BEAST so he went WEST ~ AMEN Yours BRIAN

    • Michael Edwards

      Cheers Brian - that made me smile.

    • P.H.Rose

      Brilliant Michael
      This is so good.
      I love it....
      Can you do illustrations..?

      • Michael Edwards

        Thanks PH - I am more a cartoonist but yes I have done illustrations in the past.

        • P.H.Rose

          Sorry I ment cartoons
          I've wrote a poem book for
          My grand kids and need
          Some cartoons of the mice
          Characters, I have the pics
          But try as I might they look
          Rubbish...

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        • MendedFences27

          Humor and art, Refreshing. Now a jumper, that's like a sweater, correct? Nice little village. - Phil A.

          • Michael Edwards

            That's right - we call them jumpers in the UK - thanks for the comment.



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