INSIDE OUTSIDE
He wore his jumper inside out
and he thought it made him look thin.
But when they assured him it made him look stout
he wore outside in.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
Offline) - Published: February 7th, 2017 00:35
- Comment from author about the poem: A profound offering for today plus one of my local village scenes
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and the moral is he wanted to look skinning,. lovely picture Michael. you paint Michael WW
Thanks Willy - don't we all.
LOL! Love it, Awesome painting
Thanks so much Tony
Welcome
Loved it. Painting too.
Thanks for your kind comment
Thanks MICHEAL ~ Great picture and a great comic poem ! I knew a man who wore a VEST to keep the coldness off his CHEST ~ Weather in the EAST's a BEAST so he went WEST ~ AMEN Yours BRIAN
Cheers Brian - that made me smile.
Brilliant Michael
This is so good.
I love it....
Can you do illustrations..?
Thanks PH - I am more a cartoonist but yes I have done illustrations in the past.
Sorry I ment cartoons
I've wrote a poem book for
My grand kids and need
Some cartoons of the mice
Characters, I have the pics
But try as I might they look
Rubbish...
I've extended the poem
Ellie lapage, female mouse detective
And part time opera singer...
The book is going to be a
Type of scrap book,
On each page is a part of
The poem story at the top
And at the bottom
In the middle is a cartoon
Depicting the story...
I will draw a couple of mousey ideas and post them with one of my poems.
Brilliant I have a pic of the main character
Ellie Lapage, I'll try and send you it.
Thanks
I've just drawn a couple of mouse designs which I'll post tomorrow
Thanks
Humor and art, Refreshing. Now a jumper, that's like a sweater, correct? Nice little village. - Phil A.
That's right - we call them jumpers in the UK - thanks for the comment.
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