Do you remember me baby!
do I ever cross your mind
does your mind ever wander back
to that place in time
They say a hot romance
burns out fast
ahh but what a love while it lasts
a couple years pass not too long
but a lifetime of memories to look back on
I dream of you from time to time
and the sweet memories of you
that echo in my mind
I know I could have made it real
true love for you is what I could feel
I just couldn't connect the dots
Too many wrongs
too many rights
too many feelings for me to fight
you bought linen with my last name
and when we made love
it drove me insane
So please forgive me
if you will
but I just couldn't make marriage
part of the deal
But you will always have a place
pressed in the memories of my mind
as I dream of you
from time to time...
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Author:
Ron parrish (Pseudonym) (
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Thanks RON for caring and sharing ~ Beautiful poem and equally beautiful song. Loved the lines "You bought linen ~ with my last name ~ And when we made love it drove me insane" ~ O yes I remember it well ! I find that every Lady ~ with whom I have had encounters of the Third kind ~ is indelibly branded on my heart ~ and each one IS still wonderful. The opportunity for betrothal comes and (sadly) goes. Some are now married and Mothers which makes one wonder ~ WHAT IF ? My current GF is awesome ~ and my MOM likes her ~ my DAD adores her and she is a Friend of my Sister ? ~ Who knows ? Yours BRIAN (UK)
thank you brian,looks like you have a keeper
Nice poem 👍
glad you liked it !
Great romantic poem! Song and visual really added to it. I really like this beautiful poem. " Couldn't make marriage part of the deal" but she clearly made a mark.
lol,thank you for the visit
This is incredible. Love it. Sad, but beautifully done.
thank you my friend ,it`s actually about a man committing adultery
Ouch!
beautiful ron as always ~ this one is a very honest write!
thank you jane,did you have a good valentines ?
yes and now we are in arizona celebrating our 10th wedding anniversary! hope you had a great valentine's day :0)
happy anniversary ! ate to much candy
So many men and women take for granted what they have at home. Great point about the loss of commitment in a marriage.
well a bad subject i guess but everyday truth
thank you
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