Christmas Morning, 1974

Will Hiltz

Christmas Morning, 1974

 

 

cold winds gust 

annoying my face with rain

 

city-smells bother 

from the slopes of Hong Kong

 

the world is grey - 

 

      city to starboard

      harbor water rippled with rain

      freighters and junks in the murky distance

 

all grey in the dawn

 

my thoughts too - leaden 

clouded from Christmas Eve liquor

in a rancid bar -

 

forced merriment and endless whiskeys

trying to forget

what I cannot forget

  • Author: Will Hiltz (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 27th, 2017 00:45
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is the last of what I consider my top-tier poems that I\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'ll be posting here. But some lesser lights will appear from here on out which may still appeal. Enjoy.
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  • Michael Edwards

    And enjoy I did - great write

  • willyweed

    yes I agree and now I have a hang over enjoyable read! ww

  • Goldfinch60

    Good write.

  • Tony36

    Great write



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