I fell asleep and found my dream
The moon carried me away
It lifted me in the pale moon light
And now I long to stay
I saw that I had fallen
Into your sweetest of love songs
I want to dance with- you tonight
Dancing all night long
Below the stars all shining
Until the star light fades
A long -enchanted evening
Out on the promenade
Keeping promises we made
Walking hand and hand with you
There we will dance together
Our future will be bright
And we will find each other
and all the love we gave
In the morning light
Out on the promenade
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Author:
willyweed (
Offline) - Published: February 27th, 2017 01:46
- Comment from author about the poem: we are fools if we dance or not so we might as well dance
- Category: Love
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Comments7
Nice work and footwork WW.
Thank You WBL...may I cut in?
May your dance last forever WW.
Thank You Goldfinch, so far so good. I know a lot of birds can sing, any known for dancing? Ducks have web feet might be hard for them? ww
And yours is a romantic uplifting poem and so well drafted - love it.
Thank you kind sir! I don't recall if this is a dance poem about love or a love poem about dance ... I will let you lead on that score! Thanks again Michael I wanted to lift you up this morning boy are you are getting heavy! ww
Great write
you tricked me Tony I thought you would say awesome this time ...good one! WW
A moonlit night on the promenade, a great setting for love and dance. This is a wonderful expression of love's fulfillment and endurance. To remember promises long ago made, and the thrill of physical contact. Good words, good work. - Phil A.
Thanks Phil you are to kind ! ww
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