All these other girls...
They have perfect hair
They have perfect bodies
They have perfect faces
And I can't compete
But
I have a perfect heart
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Author:
izzy (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: sorry haven't posted for a while. Thank you for all the lovely thing you put on my first poem, A hero's journey. I hope you like this one.
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Yes I do like it very much but would like to change the last two lines if I may be so bold to:
'and I can compete
because
I have a perfect heart'.
Thank you I think that make it better
Hope you didn't mind - its a great little verse whatever way.
Your heart is the most important part of you.
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