After dark
In my head
A voice shouts my name
Before I answer
It takes control
Forcing me to weep
Until I fall a sleep
Since I was young
The voice had control
Throughout all my pain
Along with my suffering
We hid the pain
From every person
Along with every tear and silent scream
Within myself
Over the years
Inside my heart
The pain is bottled up
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Author:
poeticgirl (
Offline) - Published: March 2nd, 2017 12:19
- Comment from author about the poem: I was depressed so I decided to write a poem about it.
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
WELCOME FRIEND ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ~ personally I also find if i have a problem ~ writing a poem about it helps ! A problem shared is a problem halved. You will fin MPS is a very empathetic site ~ I understand ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
I know exactly how you feel. I think this poem is wonderful, and you are a great poet.
I also my self go through depression
And over the years writing has helped me. I've been writing since I was young and has been a great tool for me to let feelings out that I can't say out loud so I can relate to this. And its never easy to let the feelings out that you want to get out. But once you get those feelings out sometimes we are afraid of what people might think or what people will say and some times people don't understand what depression does and how it affects us But over the years i've learned how to control it and thank you for this poem
Good emotive write, I do hope this will oas and the light comes back into your world.
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