An Evening Stroll With Grandpa

rrodriguez

In the cool of evening day

Grandpa took a stroll with us

God please make this moment stay

and for always will be thus

 

Grandpa took a stroll with us

We’re very happy he did

and for always will be thus

Never this time stop, God forbid

 

We’re very happy he did

Happily the three of us walked

Never this time stop, God forbid

All along the sidewalk we talked

 

Happily the three of us walked

God please make this moment stay

All along the sidewalk we talked

In the cool of evening day

 

  • Author: rrodriguez (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 3rd, 2017 13:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: This poem is dedicated to Tato Santiago, my friend and brother of many years, Tato... Being a grandpa too, I cherished those moments with our grandkids.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 36
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Comments6

  • willyweed

    I never meet by grandfather'(s)
    Now I try to be the awesome poppa dude to my grandkids Joyful read RR

    • rrodriguez

      Thanks poppa dude... I thank you for reading my poem and commenting.

    • Tony36

      Wonderfully written and expressed Great write

      • rrodriguez

        Thank you Tony, you always come through...

        • Tony36

          Welcome

        • Augustus

          You write about the real treasure of our lives. Nuestros tesoros.

          • rrodriguez

            Indeed, they're our treasure and we love them unconditionally.

          • MendedFences27

            Precious moments indeed. I believe it is the return of innocent eyes that make us see again the truth of life and nature, that makes the moments with grandchildren so special. Love the words and the way you put this together. Nice write - Phil A.

            • rrodriguez

              Thank you Phil. I like your philosophical perspective on this poem. Thank you for reading my poem and for your kind words and the encouragement you give.

            • Michael Edwards

              A touching piece put together with such feeling - it makes me want to go and make even more fuss of my grandchildren than I already do which shows what a great write this is.

              • rrodriguez

                Oh to be a granddad with the silly antics. That\'s why our grandchildren find us so much fun. Thank you Michael for reading my poem and for your comments.

              • Goldfinch60

                Very good write. My Grandchildren walk with me and life is wonderful.

                • rrodriguez

                  Thank you GF, to be a grandpa is to be blessed.



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