Trust is like an eraser
That gets smaller after every mistake
she doesn't put on that smile
because she knows she cannot fake
the fact that she was getting played
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Author:
Marie Bonilla (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem means that I had trust towards that person but with every mistake and lie that trust started to fed alway.
- Category: Love
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Comments11
This is wonderfully put, brilliant write!
Thank you so much.
Much truth in your words great write
Thank you.
Welcome
Truth hurts a lot but I love this .
Awe thank you and big facts
This poem is amazing good job princess ❤️
Awe thank you baby 🔐😊
lots of this going around....sadly good point good write!
Thank you
Trust once lost is almost impossible to get back. Good write.
Yeah, I agree with you in that one. And thank you.
WELCOME MARIE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ which aptly illustrates the erosive effect of the betrayal of trust. It is very true that each betrayal erodes our trust until in the end there is NOTHING left. Your poem describes this elegantly and succinctly. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
I will , and thank you so much. I really Appreciate it .
Short, simple, blunt but oh so beautiful. well done
Thank you today ill post one longer, i hope to see what you like about it.
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