Openess

Augustus

 

 

Like stars your eyes guide me
through darkest times. Mine
own closed I stumble. My heart
too ought remain open, lest the
path begin to crumble.

 

Augustus / Folsom LA / March 2017

  • Author: Augustus (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 7th, 2017 10:49
  • Category: Spiritual
  • Views: 18
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Comments6

  • orchidee

    Good write.

    • Augustus

      Thanks O.

    • willyweed

      wonderful message here Augustus, very nice!

      • Augustus

        Trying to focus. Thanks.

        • willyweed

          yeah I tried that its not for me though?

        • 2 more comments

        • Michael Edwards

          Short but oh so effective - good 'un Augustus.

          • Augustus

            Thanks so much.

          • WriteBeLight

            We will catch you Augustus!

            • Augustus

              Aren't you the sweet one. What a beautiful comment. Brought tears to my eyes. Now I have to,stop and go find some tissue.

            • Goldfinch60

              Very good write.

              • Augustus

                Thanks from across the pond.

              • MendedFences27

                Very spiritual, indeed. A great thought on life and coping. Brilliant and almost a prayer. Nice one. - Phil A.

                • Augustus

                  Yes, exactly what I was thinking. I almost capatilized Eyes, as it was a path toward heaven, but left it for the reader. Could also be Mom or Dad, someone whom you look up to.



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