Promise Me Please

WriteBeLight

As I face,

My demise,

I look deeply,

Into your eyes.

 

Sullen, sad,

Full of tears.

You sit by me,

Full of fear.

 

My pain is real.

I can’t deny.

I’ve stopped asking,

The reason why.

 

So many bad,

People around.

Why, then me,

In this state I’m found.

 

But, not up to me,

Not mine to make.

A Holy decision,

On me he’s placed.

 

So, all that’s left,

For me to do.

Is value these moments,

I have left with you.

 

I do not want,

You to be sad.

Focus on good times,

Together, we’ve had.

 

The day I came,

To be myself,

Day I found love,

With you, yourself.

 

The life we had,

Each other, both.

Filled us with joy,

Filled us with hope.

 

I’ve been blessed,

I appreciate.

Even though,

This now’s my fate.

 

As I fall into,

Eternal sleep,

Go on with life,

My memory keep.

 

Promise me though,

You’ll find happiness.

No more sadness for me,

Honor this request.

 

Please.

  • Author: WriteBeLight (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 10th, 2017 06:21
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 46
  • Users favorite of this poem: Augustus
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  • willyweed

    Beautiful sentiment , just a poem though right...? ww

    • WriteBeLight

      Yes. It is what I would want my family to feel. Thanks.

      • willyweed

        yes that's what I was thinking...hoping? thanks for everything Lady!

        • WriteBeLight

          Welcome WW 🙂

        • Goldfinch60

          Good emotive write. Life is for living, make the best of it, every moment should be treasured,

          • WriteBeLight

            I agree and some should take your advice. Thanks!

          • Tony36

            Wonderfully written and expressed Great write

          • Augustus

            You have no idea how I relate to this. This is very special.

            • WriteBeLight

              Thanks so very much Augustus. I will remember your reply forever. I do feel that my loved ones, now passed, do not want me to feel sad. So, I try my best to remember only the great times. Thanks again 🙂

            • Augustus

              P.S. I noticed the pinky promise in the photo.

              • WriteBeLight

                Yes. 🙂 Thanks so much for saving as a favorite.

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                HI HONEY ~ Thanks for sharing the sadness and finality of your future bereavement with us in a very very elegant poem. Death doth hide but not divide ~ It is as though the rose that bloomed upon our garden wall ~ has blossomed on the other side. We won't be sad for you Honey ~ because you will be in a better place ~ bu we will miss you and your elegant poems and your pithy comments ! Heavenly Hugs ~ BRIAN

                • WriteBeLight

                  Thanks Dear Brian! What a lovely thing to say. I will remember that always. I totally agree with your point of view on the subject. Many, many Thanks!!



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