I looked inside myself and surrendered
to the things within I have seen
and then I just remembered
why it is I came to be
this incarnation was my doing
I have entered this life with free will
I came searching for the answers
now my soul will not be still
I seek to find the meaning
to these places where i am drawn
and if I can find the answers
I shall bring a brand new dawn
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Author:
willyweed (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I seek refuse in the Lord of daybreak
- Category: Spiritual
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Thank you DS I am sure he does!
We all feel like you WW... I believe we're never settled in who we are.... but life is good & above all God is good and loves us. Be blessed and keep us reading your fine poetry.
I appreciate your fine comment RR and I have spent time on your beautiful Island home, even honeymooned there a long time ago!
Great! I know live in Florida and work here. I would like to go back to visit.
Great structure Willy and a great write.
Thank you Michael I appreciate your reading and comment! WW
Good write, we all look for that place where peace and love exists and occasionally we find it only to lose it once more but at least we know it is out there.
Thank You sir I am happy you enjoyed it and thank you for the read and comment!
Beautiful poem, ww! Enjoyable read.
Thank you Christina How are you today you doing ok?
Yep, I'm doing Ok. Thanks for asking!
well that took awhile so you must be sure?
I'm very sure 🙂
I am so glad you are, you feeling real good today!
Yep, the sun is shining bright!
funny that's what I just wrote on your poem March?
Great minds think alike!
yes they do you know any?
Ours! We made a nice poem once. I'm going to write one now. 🙂
we could make another?
oops! send me your thoughts!!
? forget something?
well what do you what to write about love, money, life ?
I read this as positive, an awakening of sorts with hope for the future. This is master class poetry.
yes I have written this in a positive view an awakening of sorts to a brighter future and a hope for all to see we could do a lot better with/for one another, Master class I leave in the hands of the reader? but thank you Augustus it sounds nice.
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