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Can I ask you what went wrong?
Why your love suddenly, was gone?
I thought we would get better than before
But you've got bitter and cold.
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I ask myself every night,
Why you never held me tight?
Is there someone new?
Or your love just got through?
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I can't imagine why I love you this much?
When you went other places, you don't keep in touch.
But still, I keep my eyes on you,
Even that you don't love me too.
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When you sleep, you turn your back on me,
When you sleep, you hug your pillow, not me.
When you sleep, do you dream of me?
Or you just dream of somebody?
*
You don't kiss me goodnight,
It hurts me more and more.
You don't kiss me goodnight
It just got my heart tore.
Author's note:
All of my compositions are labor of love, hurt, and pain..
Originally made from my own Experiences.
A copyright not a copycat.
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Author:
Gelyn Guinto Rodriguez (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 12th, 2017 09:08
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
OMG GEL ~ You are so so beautiful and this so so sad poem made me cry for you and your breaking heart. I send you my cyber love if it's any consolation ! Big Hugs ~ BRIAN (UK)
🙂 thanks Bryan. ..lol I'm glad you felt the pain
Good emotive write.
Thank you sir
I feel it, well done.
Thank u for reading
Women always know when something is not right. Nicely done.
Yeah you're certainly right
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