WAS IT LOVE?
She looked forward with new hope.
What did her eyes see?
Was it love?
His face displayed contentment.
Were his dreams answered?
Was it her?
He moved slowly towards her.
Would she reach for him?
Was she there?
The creaking stairs had many treads.
Would they reach the stars?
Were they lit?
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
Offline) - Published: March 27th, 2017 00:11
- Comment from author about the poem: Only two more to go - hope you enjoy - plus yet another watercolour.
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this is very interesting ,kinda walks you through the relationship
i have one similar is it love
I think it might be developing.
Now I am really intrigued.
It might become clearer tomorrow
Is everybody lit? A line from one of my favorite movies. Humm... trying to visualize where this is going.
Upwards methinks.
The line about the stairs is interesting.
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Been loving the whole set. Can't wait for the rest. Great write
thanks Tony - only two to go - could be a bit boring if it went beyond that.
Welcome
Onward and upward. What's at the top of those stairs? Are they really stairs? The intrigue mounts. I want you to install a >> key.Great write, holds everyone's attention. Keeps us mystified. Wanting more. - Phil A.
A key is it ? I'll see what I can do...!
Keep the intrigue and the love flowing... great job with both, the poem and the painting.
oh this is cool Michael!
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