Michael Edwards

WAS IT LOVE (4)

WAS IT LOVE?

 

 

She looked forward with new hope.

What did her eyes see?

Was it love?

 

His face displayed contentment.

Were his dreams answered?

Was it her?

 

He moved slowly towards her.

Would she reach for him?

Was she there?

 

The creaking stairs had many treads.

Would they reach the stars?

Were they lit?

 

Comments7

  • ron parrish aka wordman

    this is very interesting ,kinda walks you through the relationship
    i have one similar is it love

  • Goldfinch60

    Now I am really intrigued.

  • WriteBeLight

    Is everybody lit? A line from one of my favorite movies. Humm... trying to visualize where this is going.

  • 2 more comments

  • Tony36

    Been loving the whole set. Can't wait for the rest. Great write

    • Michael Edwards

      thanks Tony - only two to go - could be a bit boring if it went beyond that.

      • Tony36

        Welcome

      • MendedFences27

        Onward and upward. What's at the top of those stairs? Are they really stairs? The intrigue mounts. I want you to install a >> key.Great write, holds everyone's attention. Keeps us mystified. Wanting more. - Phil A.

        • Michael Edwards

          A key is it ? I'll see what I can do...!

        • rrodriguez

          Keep the intrigue and the love flowing... great job with both, the poem and the painting.

        • willyweed

          oh this is cool Michael!



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