SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 1

BRIAN & ANGELA

 

 

SUN & THE PLANETS IN ORDER ~ M V E M J S U N IX

 

Our SUN is so bright

Nuclear Fusion gives it light 

that's neat lots of heat !

 

The MOON's another

story ~ she basks in the Sun's

reflected glory ! 

 

Number 9 ~ doth vex

PLANET IX ~ depravity

only gravity

 

MERCURY ~ next Sun

shines bright ~ just like a candle 

to hot to handle

 

VENUS ~ planet of

TRUE LOVE ~ to make you swoon ~ but

sadly there's no moon

 

EARTH ~ is unique our

Home Planet ~ half is water

and half is granite !

 

MARS is one ~ we'd like

to colonise ~ Buzz Aldrin 

reachin' for the skies !

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love BRIAN

These HAIKU are all 17 syllables in a  5 7 5  triplet ~ OK 

  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 28th, 2017 04:18
  • Comment from author about the poem: Mankind has always been fascinated by The Sun ~ Moon ~ Planets and now we've found another one PLANET IX ! There is only one problem ~ we can't see it only feel it ! It has been detected by gravity ~ beyond the now demoted PLUTO ~ another Mickey Mouse Planet ! It would have been more fun if Mars & Venus had been populated ~ but perhaps one day Mars will be ~ as an Earth overspill ~ Buzz Aldrin (Man on the Moon) is busy buying up real estate and building Mars Bars ~ watch this space ! More tomorrow ~ comets welcome ~ May the Force be with you ~ Love to All ~ BRIAN XOX
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  • Michael Edwards

    Yet another good 'un Brian

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      THANKS MICHAEL ~ I love HAIKU ~ short bu not always sweet. I am aware they shouldn't rhyme but it makes them more recitable ! BRIAN

    • orchidee

      But you is only on Part 1 - you said so in the title! I wasn't expecting to read all parts at once - and I didn't! The are probably in Part 2, 3, however many parts!

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks "O" pleased you noticed. I haven't left any out ~ they will all be included in tomorrow ! Yours BRIAN

      • Christina8

        Wonderful Haiku! I see you took poetic license with these and made them rhyme, I love it! They are all very unique and well written. Well done! Hugs-Christina

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thanks CHRIS pleased you liked them ! The Solar Planets are always a good subject for a poem ! ET Hugs ~ BRIAN

        • Tony36

          Great write

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            THANKS TONY ~ pleased you liked it ~ BRIAN

            • Tony36

              Welcome



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