I love you but I cannot touch you
I tell you how I feel but you don't reply
I can see you move, but I cannot dance with you
When the sky is overcast you leave me lonely
I can see you're sad, but you never cry
You are but a shadow of my lover
She has cast herself upon the sky
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Author:
willyweed (
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- Comment from author about the poem: shadows of lost love and pain
- Category: Love
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A poignant write which highlights the pain caused in relationships when lost is communication .
Thank you my dear Fay for the read and comment!
Very deep WW.
yes love is a deep feeling when probed! Thank you nice Lady!
Now this is just perfect - a poetic ballet - into my favourites.
Thank you kindly sir!
This is a very deep and relatable poem when love is lost. Awesome write!
Why Thank You my sweet Christina I do appreciate that!
and you are but a brilliant poet Mr willyweed, and sadness of lost loves seems to bring out the poetry words to fit any emotional write. keep those words alive.!
yeah I take after you in that respect! Thank you Kevin ! WW
Beautiful write.
Thank you my friend! sincerely WW
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