you are but a shadow

willyweed

 

I love you but I cannot touch you
I tell you how I feel but you don't reply
I can see you move, but I cannot dance with you
When the sky is overcast you leave me lonely
I can see you're sad, but you never cry
You are but a shadow of my lover
She has cast herself upon the sky

 

  • Author: willyweed (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 29th, 2017 07:10
  • Comment from author about the poem: shadows of lost love and pain
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 45
  • Users favorite of this poem: lovelydarkanddeep, Michael Edwards
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  • Fay Slimm.

    A poignant write which highlights the pain caused in relationships when lost is communication .

  • willyweed

    Thank you my dear Fay for the read and comment!

  • WriteBeLight

    Very deep WW.

    • willyweed

      yes love is a deep feeling when probed! Thank you nice Lady!

    • Michael Edwards

      Now this is just perfect - a poetic ballet - into my favourites.

      • willyweed

        Thank you kindly sir!

      • Christina8

        This is a very deep and relatable poem when love is lost. Awesome write!

        • willyweed

          Why Thank You my sweet Christina I do appreciate that!

        • kevin browne

          and you are but a brilliant poet Mr willyweed, and sadness of lost loves seems to bring out the poetry words to fit any emotional write. keep those words alive.!

        • willyweed

          yeah I take after you in that respect! Thank you Kevin ! WW

        • Goldfinch60

          Beautiful write.

          • willyweed

            Thank you my friend! sincerely WW



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