Love isn't always fair
Dreams don't always come true
Hopes are sometimes crushed
The truth is painful
Your band might not stick together
Your teachers might not be angels
Your parents probably don't understand
Your life might suck
but...
Love is amazing
Dreams are imaginative
Hopes are eternal
Truth never lies
They saved millions
Only a few more years
At 18 you can leave
You only get one
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WolfIsControlledByTheDemons (Pseudonym) (
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I love it. So great to read when we are feeling down. Awesome write!
Thanks Hopey I'm glad you liked it
Thanks for sharing AMBER ~ another great poem.Lots of negatives in the first STANZA ~ BUT ~ lots of positive in STANZA 2. Love ~ Dreams ~ Hopes ~ Truth these are the 4 traits that drive me and I've turned 18 so I have experienced FREEDOM and I love it ! Thanks for caring and sharing loved your poem ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN.
Thanks Brian! Very appreciative of you commenting. You're lucky to have freedom in ur life. I have 3 more years after this one. Thanks again
wow. just wow. i loved this! you are a great writer! i love the italicizing and bold words! ~Izzy
Thanks Izzy but I'm young so don't think I'm a great writer but I'm happy u liked it
Don't worry! I'm young too! Young writers are rare!
Good write, and yes love is amazing.
Thanks goldfinch much appreciated
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