The sun in April
Girls dress light in hope of love
Showers January.
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Jabberwocky (
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The sun in April
Girls dress light in hope of love
Showers January.
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THANKS JW ~ Love the middle line ~ very true in my experience ! Love HAIKU ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN
Good haiku.
People here commonly say January as if it has three sounds; Jan You Ray.
Just a note, I thought I could get away with it 🙂
I'd be one to opt for the 4 syllables, myself - Jan-u-air-y, but don't think it matters, except as it suits your needs.
Nice haiku.
I was one sound too many! Made a change losing "comes" from third line.
Great write
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