Sun in April (Haiku)

Jabberwocky

The sun in April
Girls dress light in hope of love
Showers January.

  • Author: Jabberwocky (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 3rd, 2017 03:24
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    THANKS JW ~ Love the middle line ~ very true in my experience ! Love HAIKU ~ Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN

  • Goldfinch60

    Good haiku.

  • Jabberwocky

    People here commonly say January as if it has three sounds; Jan You Ray.
    Just a note, I thought I could get away with it 🙂

  • Frank Prem

    I'd be one to opt for the 4 syllables, myself - Jan-u-air-y, but don't think it matters, except as it suits your needs.

    Nice haiku.

  • Jabberwocky

    I was one sound too many! Made a change losing "comes" from third line.

  • Tony36

    Great write



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