Loss
I cannot replace your heart with silence,
Nor can I get my life to finally grow.
This quality of stillness is so overpowering,
No Quietness will fill this overbearing void.
Noise a welcome retreat from that emptiest space,
Elst filled with memories of your character defined face.
A loss so hard that hardly any words describe,
But a feeling no letters combined can meet its need.
A walk in dreams of times long passed,
Nothing left can now ever really last.
I wait the time when all this pain release,
Then your hand in mine we'll walk a road into our final peace...
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Author:
P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 6th, 2017 17:51
- Comment from author about the poem: Watched something on Tv earlier, was quite hard To watch.... thought of this poem when it finished...
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Comments4
You've truly captured the silence of loss - great read.
Thank you Michael
Good emotive write.
Thank you GF60
A fantastic opening line. Love it.
Thank you for
That lovely comment
Gary... made my day
Heartbreaking and a perfect write about the emptiness of losing someone you care about. Such a poet you are P.H.! 🙂
Thank you WBL
That is such a great
Comment coming
From you as I think
You are a poets poet
If you know what I mean
My cup over floweth...
You are so kind!
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