Loss..

P.H.Rose

                   Loss

 

I cannot replace your heart with silence,
Nor can I get my life to finally grow.
This quality of stillness is so overpowering,
No Quietness will fill this overbearing void.
Noise a welcome retreat from that emptiest space,
Elst filled with memories of your character defined face.
A loss so hard that hardly any words describe,
But a feeling no letters combined can meet its need.
A walk in dreams of times long passed,
Nothing left can now ever really last.
I wait the time when all this pain release,
Then your hand in mine we'll walk a road into our final peace...

  • Author: P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 6th, 2017 17:51
  • Comment from author about the poem: Watched something on Tv earlier, was quite hard To watch.... thought of this poem when it finished...
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  • Michael Edwards

    You've truly captured the silence of loss - great read.

    • P.H.Rose

      Thank you Michael

    • Goldfinch60

      Good emotive write.

      • P.H.Rose

        Thank you GF60

      • Garry

        A fantastic opening line. Love it.

        • P.H.Rose

          Thank you for
          That lovely comment
          Gary... made my day

        • WriteBeLight

          Heartbreaking and a perfect write about the emptiness of losing someone you care about. Such a poet you are P.H.! 🙂

          • P.H.Rose

            Thank you WBL
            That is such a great
            Comment coming
            From you as I think
            You are a poets poet
            If you know what I mean
            My cup over floweth...

            • WriteBeLight

              You are so kind!



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