You're dancing barefoot in the morning dew
to lose yourself in nature's waking call.
The gardens freshness seems to breathe through you
and spiders spin their webs lest you should fall.
Your open lips sip moisture from the flowers
that bow their heads before they take your hand.
Soft pastels brought to life by summer showers
set free the captured eyes that watch you stand.
This moment breaks on noises in the street
you turn your smile and see me move away.
The paving stones are patterned by damp feet
that follow me to arms that hold your sway.
Again the window tastes the tap of rain;
our first embrace adds colour to the frame.
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Author:
Mogway (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 9th, 2017 16:59
- Comment from author about the poem: Sonnet
- Category: Love
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Comments3
WELCOME MOGWAY ~ I love Sonnets ! Your first poem is an elegant 4-4-4-2 Sonnet replete with rhyme (English rhyming scheme) and rhythm (iambic pentameter) as all true Sonnets should be. The Sonnet form is the perfect showcase for a Love Poem and the sentiments and images presented in your delicate poem is worthy of the form. Love the released passion in the final doublet ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ more please. Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
Thank you Brian, you are very kind
Good write. Welcome to MPS.
Many thanks Goldfinch very happy to be here.
Very beautifully done.
Thank you Garry, I don't write many sonnets so its good to get this kind of feedback.
Feedback is a great help. Can't have too much of it.
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