unfolding

willyweed

life is given to us

like a beautiful sunrise

 

it unfolds before us

with great wonder and surprise

 

with un-bounding glory

right before our eyes

 

live it to the fullest

and have not one regret

 

for when this life is over

there comes a beautiful sunset

  • Author: willyweed (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 10th, 2017 08:19
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    A fine write.

    • willyweed

      Thanks O I am glad you like it!

    • WriteBeLight

      So true WW.

      • willyweed

        Thank You My Lady Fair!

      • rrodriguez

        Now this is beautiful... Life unfolding before your eyes. Great job WW, very well written and so profound in its message.

        • willyweed

          Thank You RR happy you enjoyed this one!

        • lovelydarkanddeep

          Dang Willy, you're pretty famous on here aren't you 😉 nice write love, izzy

          • willyweed

            Oh Izzy that's only cuz you my gal! sweet girl o mine! ww

            • lovelydarkanddeep

              nah, you got your fame from you! i'm just one of the fans ;)-izzy

            • Michael Edwards

              Pretty darn good famous Willy

              • willyweed

                Who's he never heard of 'em Thanks Michael...

              • P.H.Rose

                Well done sir this is great
                So bloody good....

                • willyweed

                  Thank You PH I appreciate that!

                • Garry

                  Fone poem, fine picture

                  • willyweed

                    Thank You Garry for the read and comment!

                    • Garry

                      Fine poem. Not Fone.

                      • willyweed

                        I figured with the I right next to the O it was a type=o but thank you for the clarification, I appreciate the comment and read all the same Have a nice day or night there? ww

                        • Garry

                          Night in the UK. Just finishing off a haiku and a limerick then bed.
                          Hard graft this poetry lark.

                          • willyweed

                            yes much work this writing business! sweet dreams 4 U ww

                          • MendedFences27

                            A very hopeful and uplifting message. Sunrise, Sunset, all is well. Beautifully presented with hope for the sunny side of life. Nicely done. - Phil A.

                            • willyweed

                              Thanks Phil sunny side up always ! ww

                            • kevin browne

                              you make my knees go weak willyweed. I don't mind though if this is what your poems do. done with such eloquence.

                              • willyweed

                                Thanks Kevin I so appreciate your comment!

                                • kevin browne

                                  Anytime Mr willyweed. the ink you write is 'ALWAYS' full of brilliantly compiled words. I love that style.

                                • Goldfinch60

                                  Very good write, and so very true. That sunset shows our Spirit the path that we will all take to eternity.

                                  • willyweed

                                    Agreed mate thanks for the view! ww



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