Love is you
And love is me
Love is when the parlour light makes three
And three's a crowd
As we all know
So out the parlour light will go
Love is me
And love is you
Love is when there's only two!
April 2017 (and Sept 1988)
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Author:
Garry (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 10th, 2017 15:38
- Comment from author about the poem: Short, but hopefully sweet. A very quick rewrite of a few lines i started about 30 years ago when i first met my wife. Obviously she wasn't my wife until later!
- Category: Love
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Comments4
This little 'un is a real delight and gave me a smile..
Thank you. Sometimes that's all they are meant to do, and all that's needed. There's enough angst in the world already.
Very sweet and upbeat seems it worked for ya as well!
Just a bit of whimsy quickly written, but i think it's rather nice and works well. My wife essentially got rougher versions of the first and third verses but i felt something was missing. Added the 2nd verse. Not too sure it works bur...
Very good write, I liked this one a lot.
Thank you. My own preference is for something slightly darker but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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