Garden
Sunshine
Twisting the spine to flick the pages of a well read book
I look up and light is thrown through the dappled leaves onto my already freckled face
Time has raced by since you walked away
You left and I screamed for you to stay
Now you scream to stay and I tell you to leave
I believed that day you took so much of me
Now I know you gave ME back
I cry for your pain and I would sew you together if I knew that my stitches would stay
But I don't cry for me
You took all of my tears
In the light of my garden I can see...
ME again
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Author:
W.R Zelman (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 11th, 2017 06:06
- Comment from author about the poem: Jim
- Category: Reflection
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Comments5
Some lovely language used to paint a vivid picture. Well done.
Thank you, I wanted to set the scene. I wrote it today in the garden so it was very fresh
Good style and nice visuals lovely garden you have there.
Thank you, I have just read some of yours... many many comments, you must be well loved on here!
Well thank you Down, I try many good poets here. I put my (what I think is) best
work up first and not so many comments? I guess it takes a few post to draw a crowd. see ya in the funny papers! ww
i love the style you gave this piece, well done
Thank you
Beautiful write. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you, this site is so friendly and really boosted my confidence
Garry took the words
Right out of my mouth.
Vivid picture perfectly
Discribed it....
Another good one...
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