Garry

Feeling Ill. (A haiku)

Vomiting again.

Dizziness , headache and pain.

Drank too much last night

Comments6

  • Michael Edwards

    Good one Garry - you might find it hard to believe but I've only ever been drunk once in my life - boring old fart I hear you say.

    • Garry

      Very sensible. It has been many, many years since I ve had a hangover. Thank god.

    • willyweed

      nice hang over Garry!

      • Garry

        Nice hangover. No such thing. Though i hope the poem about the hangover is nice.

      • Alethia

        I didn't really get this one

        • Garry

          Not sure what there is to get, or indeed not get about it?
          Just a daft fairly pointless haiku about the daft and fairly pointless activity of drinking too much and getting hungover.

          (i realise that there are serious problems related to alcohol abuse and this isn't intended as any sort of comment on these and certainly not meant to make light of such issues)

        • P.H.Rose

          Ha ha.. Well done Garry
          Perfect discription

          • Garry

            Thank you. Glad it made you laugh.

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Well GARY ~ I do keep warning you !
            SHAM-PAIN at night ~ REAL-PAIN in he morning ~ Yous BRIAN

            • Garry

              Oh very good indeed

            • BRIAN & ANGELA

              Well GARY ~ I do keep warning you !
              SHAM-PAIN at night ~ REAL-PAIN in he morning ~ Yous BRIAN



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