Deep sadness

CharlotteHickey51

The darkness in my soul,

is a hole swallowing me up,

my feelings are gone,

its like I'm empty,

in another dimension,

looking in on myself trying to fight this. 

 

I want this to stop but it won't,

it never will,

the black hole in my soul, growing deeper and darker,

everytime I looked around,

i see a glimpse of an eye watching me,

watching the world around me fade away like it doesn't exist,

but then I remember I'm in a blank space with no in between. 

  • Author: CharlotteHickey51 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 18th, 2017 16:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: How I'm feeling in my life right about now
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 134
Get a free collection of Classic Poetry ↓

Receive the ebook in seconds 50 poems from 50 different authors


Comments3

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME CHARLOTTE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ sorry it's all gloom and doom. This is an empathtic site and we care for all our members ! Most of us have felt as low as you are at sometime but by FRIENDSHIP . Positive Thinking and Prayer we have survived ~ Thinking of you and praying for you
    Hugs ~ BRIAN (UK)

  • ron parrish aka wordman

    we feel depression mant times in our lives ,it`s how we handle it that matters

  • Goldfinch60

    That blank space is being filled with your words, words can overcome all.
    Welcome to MPS.



To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.