Fay Slimm

Smitten.

 

Smitten.

Do shush while it passes, this small blip
in my timing,
and let me explain.

Excuse my embarrassment, I had used
all my lines,
so am starting again.

I have an obsession, do you know what
has bitten
my heart, causing pain ?

And when I get this condition I require
a love-session
to keep me quite sane.

Well, has my open confession to being
so smitten
seeped yet to your brain ?

Now will you please listen while I put
my bold question.
Do you feel the same ?

Comments7

  • OUTBACK

    AFTER LOVE ? IS ANYONE LEFT SANE ? IT'S HARD TO SAY ? OBSESSION ! ... THE REALM of POSSESSION !

  • willyweed

    I think we all have felt this way once or twice, good write Fay!

  • Goldfinch60

    Very good write and bservation.

  • orchidee

    A fine write.

  • Michael Edwards

    Yup I enjoy

  • WriteBeLight

    That is great Fay. The picture is so appropriate!

  • MendedFences27

    Bitten by the Dove of Love? So, someone has to ask the question, might as well be you. Why is it so difficult for humans to speak on this subject? We have mouths and tongues for communication, but in love they become almost useless. Great poem Fay, loved it. - Phil A.



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