When she comes
You will know
But she won’t say hello
She just smiles
With her eyes
And when your spirit flies
You take the chance
You do the dance
And you find you are surprised
Your heart is set afire
In your soul is the desire
To have and hold this love
Then she goes
And you cry
But she won’t says good-bye
Then someday
In some way
You see it never ends
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Author:
willyweed (
Offline) - Published: April 20th, 2017 08:49
- Category: Love
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Comments10
Really good poem. I like the structure and the content. Don't stop writting.
Thank You glad you enjoyed it! ww
A fine write W.
Thank You O!
well I am thrilled you are amazed that's always a nice feeling! Thank you for reading and commenting
shine on Diamond!
Nicely done!
Thank you I appreciate that!
great stuff and love the tempo of it.
yes Thank You Michael, for the comment!
Beautiful poem. I love the picture at the top! I like how you ended it with " you see it never ends". Great job!
Thank you Christina I appreciate your reading, I hope you feel well today?
Sorry for such a late reply, I've been so busy! I'm great! Thanks for asking!
Love at first sight! Hope it works out 🙂
Love I think is worth the risk, Thank you WBL you doing good tonight?
Yes WW. Had a rough day, but am ready to face the next one. Thanks.
So true. Sometimes you never realize it's happening. Great write. Loved it. - Phil A.
yes it happens when it happens without control! Thanks Phil!
Very good write and so very true. It never ends as my wife and I can show.
yes when its true it lasts forever! !Thank you GF
Brilliant poem.
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