When Love comes

willyweed

When she comes
You will know


But she won’t say hello
She just smiles


With her eyes
And when your spirit flies


You take the chance
You do the dance


And you find you are surprised
Your heart is set afire


In your soul is the desire
To have and hold this love


Then she goes
And you cry


But she won’t says good-bye
Then someday


In some way
You see it never ends

  • Author: willyweed (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 20th, 2017 08:49
  • Category: Love
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  • Carol Coelho

    Really good poem. I like the structure and the content. Don't stop writting.

    • willyweed

      Thank You glad you enjoyed it! ww

    • orchidee

      A fine write W.

      • willyweed

        Thank You O!

      • willyweed

        well I am thrilled you are amazed that's always a nice feeling! Thank you for reading and commenting
        shine on Diamond!

      • Warded Seabee

        Nicely done!

        • willyweed

          Thank you I appreciate that!

        • Michael Edwards

          great stuff and love the tempo of it.

          • willyweed

            yes Thank You Michael, for the comment!

          • Christina8

            Beautiful poem. I love the picture at the top! I like how you ended it with " you see it never ends". Great job!

            • willyweed

              Thank you Christina I appreciate your reading, I hope you feel well today?

              • Christina8

                Sorry for such a late reply, I've been so busy! I'm great! Thanks for asking!

              • WriteBeLight

                Love at first sight! Hope it works out 🙂

                • willyweed

                  Love I think is worth the risk, Thank you WBL you doing good tonight?

                  • WriteBeLight

                    Yes WW. Had a rough day, but am ready to face the next one. Thanks.

                  • MendedFences27

                    So true. Sometimes you never realize it's happening. Great write. Loved it. - Phil A.

                    • willyweed

                      yes it happens when it happens without control! Thanks Phil!

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Very good write and so very true. It never ends as my wife and I can show.

                      • willyweed

                        yes when its true it lasts forever! !Thank you GF

                      • Micalina

                        Brilliant poem.



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