You loved me once
How did that change?
We went from being so in love
To one another crumbled up in pain
You loved me once
I know its true
You told me and showed me
And that's when I fell inlove with you
You loved me once
In your eyes I used to look like gold
But then you started to see me rust
And all of A sudden I just seemed old
You loved me once
Not that you'd admit
You act as if you never cared
Of course I act nonchalant but it still hurts me a bit
You loved me once
You never will again
The time has moved us apart
One thing I used to Cherish with you
But now its just so dark
You loved me once
I loved you too
We both gave all we had
And now I get to look back to you
A fine romance that was ours to Last
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Author:
R . Rose (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 23rd, 2017 05:41
- Comment from author about the poem: This is a simple poem I wrote when I finally let go and moved on from a romance that I once had.
- Category: Love
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Comments2
WELCOME REBECCA (lovely name) Thanks for your first poem. It is a very nostalgic "Love Poem" lovely poetic structure but a sad message. Repetition is very important in poetry and the first line ~ repeated in each verse "You loved me once" tells me it is all over ~ the love you once shared has evaporated. I'm a bit older than you and I have always learned something from all my love liaisons. My philosophy is: "Better to have loved and lost ~ than never to have loved at all !" Every blesing ~ thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
Thank you so much , I have never shared my poetry before and it's lovely to get such a supportive response.
Good emotive write. Welcome to MPS.
Thank you!
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