My little story

Writings From The Unknown13

i dont feel like myself

it feels like something is controlling me in the dark

my eyes fill with darkness, move uncontrollably

my heart fills with pain

and my body fills with a cold touch but yet so warm

the room has never been more pitch black

my eyes felt like they were seeing the inside and into my brain

my hands shaky 

one minute the room is so cold its like ice

the next its like the fire from hell

my eyes as sleepy as can be but cant sleep

the fear, the frights are so strong

the worry, the ignorance piling up

almost to much for me to handle 

but i cant handle anything if i dont have hands

my muscles ache and my head is hot

its almost impossible to put up a fight

a fight against the darkness that is haunting me

against the darkness that is filling my body with darkness

as im so so scared

i am also fearless

  • Author: Writings From The Unknown13 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 26th, 2017 08:53
  • Comment from author about the poem: in my last post i wrote that i have lost my right to write about what i love most...this is an example of what i have been told to stop writing about. i wrote this poem in maybe april or may of 2016
  • Category: Gothic
  • Views: 18
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  • Lizzy Renee

    Wow. What better words could describe? You are an amazing poet.

    • Writings From The Unknown13

      thank you my family doesnt support my dream of being a poet and songwriter a couple of days ago my sister had told me my poems arnt even that great and neither are my songs and the thing is she has never read any of my songs i dream of being a poet and this site really helps me express anything i want without any questions asked

      • Lizzy Renee

        Oh, I'm sorry about your failing support in your dream to write poems. It is not nice for such Important people to you should discourage you like that.

      • Writings From The Unknown13

        my sister is currently getting her masters degree and my dad is very high class i have other siblings that are currently successful so therefor in my family there are high expectations in a future career



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