Other People's Voices

Garry

If you serenade your lover

With other people's voices

Then she's only staying with you

If she has no other choices 

  • Author: Garry (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 3rd, 2017 03:45
  • Comment from author about the poem: I hope this is deeper than it seems. Or am I just deluding myself. I can see deepness in it anyway. The rest I leave to you.
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  • Michael Edwards

    Proverbial with deep dark overtones - yes I'm with you Garry

    • Garry

      Thank you, but perhaps we're both deluded.

      • Michael Edwards

        My family tell me I belong to another world. Mind you they do say it fondly - I think!
        Yes perhaps I'm deluded !

      • Garry

        And the lucky winner of todays "Spot the deliberate mistake" is Ephraim Crud.
        Thank you for that. Mistake corrected, cheers

      • swingline

        Hmm , I can't sing so what are her choices ?

      • WriteBeLight

        Very good Garry. Does she know the serenade is coming from other people? If she does, then she is not very deep at all 🙂 Just lazy.

        • Garry

          Who knows.
          I guess i was thinking of the opening two lines as lying.

          • WriteBeLight

            I see. So she does not know that he is? Or she is just settling. Very thought provoking.

          • Goldfinch60

            Very good write.

          • Garry

            WBL, possibly.
            Or she could know he's lying and just be using him until something comes along.
            Or perhaps the 2nd 2 lines are the cause and the first 2 the effect.
            Ie, if someone is halfhearted in dealing with their lover it is because they know their loveris only waiting for something better. (this only just occurred to me.)

          • JustABird

            I took this to mean romancing her with other people's words. I got a vision of Cyrano de Bergerac. And that all her other choices are hidden because you're standing in their way. Seems pretty deep to me whichever way you meant it.

            • Garry

              That was my first thought about it, though i imagined the recipient of the \"wooing \" to be using the \"wooer\" until something better came along or........... M Well i wasn\'t really sure what it meant.



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