Never alone, always together
Howl at the moon
Oh The Wolf
As a team, as a group we hunt
Together we can do anything
In the dark we are brave
We have each other
Oh The Wolf
Oh the wolf, oh the wolf
WE ARE THE WOLF!
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Author:
KathrineWillows (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is the first poem that I am posting. If you people like it so much, comment telling me I should publish it.
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Welcome KATHRINE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ Love the format and the topic everyone is fascinated by wolves ! I think you have captured the essence of the WOLF. They howl ~ they hunt in packs ~ they are brave together and nocturnal. Love the repetition of "OH THE WOLF" 4 times in ten lines (repetition is important in Poetry !) and the capitalised (for emphasis) last line WE ARE THE WOLF ~ excellent. This is a better poem than you think and it would appeal to all ages ~ you should publish it ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
Thank you, that means a lot to me. It didn't even take me long to write it.
Thanks Kathrine ~ the best poems just flow ~ OK~ Yours BRIAN
Good write. wolves are magnificent creatures who protect their families over all. Welcome to MPS.
You catch the spirit and freedom of the Wolf . Good poem .
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