Oh The Wolf

KathrineWillows

Never alone, always together

Howl at the moon

Oh The Wolf

As a team, as a group we hunt

Together we can do anything

In the dark we are brave

We have each other

Oh The Wolf

Oh the wolf, oh the wolf

WE ARE THE WOLF!

  • Author: KathrineWillows (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 7th, 2017 15:03
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is the first poem that I am posting. If you people like it so much, comment telling me I should publish it.
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments3

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Welcome KATHRINE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ Love the format and the topic everyone is fascinated by wolves ! I think you have captured the essence of the WOLF. They howl ~ they hunt in packs ~ they are brave together and nocturnal. Love the repetition of "OH THE WOLF" 4 times in ten lines (repetition is important in Poetry !) and the capitalised (for emphasis) last line WE ARE THE WOLF ~ excellent. This is a better poem than you think and it would appeal to all ages ~ you should publish it ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.

    • KathrineWillows

      Thank you, that means a lot to me. It didn't even take me long to write it.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks Kathrine ~ the best poems just flow ~ OK~ Yours BRIAN

      • Goldfinch60

        Good write. wolves are magnificent creatures who protect their families over all. Welcome to MPS.

      • swingline

        You catch the spirit and freedom of the Wolf . Good poem .



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