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SoulTuesday

awareness has always been my issue

i don't lack it

instead it blinds me

           deafens me 

            drowns me

way i see it

we're puzzle pieces

making up the cosmos 

and i know my piece is bent

 

i sit up late at night

seeing the other pieces

trying to feel their lives

wondering...

do they feel misshapen too?

 

i long more than anything

for that blissful ignorance

to forget the fact

i just dont fit

 

 

 

 

  • Author: SoulTuesday (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 8th, 2017 00:37
  • Comment from author about the poem: just my usual late night musings
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 18
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  • Mandi

    Maybe your piece isn't bent it just belongs to a 3D puzzle. You just haven't found the pieces that connect to you yet. I hope you do. Best wishes and hugs.

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME SOUL TUESDAY ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ~ and the enigma it presents ! We are all (more or less) aware of the environment we are in but uncertain of the sppecific niche we fit ! Life is an ecological puzzle ! MANDI is right we re all 3D so finding the fit is harder than adding a "piece" to a 2D jigsaw puzzle ! The trouble is "Life & Love" is dynamic so todays perfect fit ~ can be tomorrows misfit ~ I love the challenge of you Poem ~ more please ! Please check my poems ~ BRIAN (UK)

  • Tony36

    Great write and welcome to MPS

  • Lizzy Renee

    Nice Poem and welcome to My Poetic Side. 🙂



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