awareness has always been my issue
i don't lack it
instead it blinds me
deafens me
drowns me
way i see it
we're puzzle pieces
making up the cosmos
and i know my piece is bent
i sit up late at night
seeing the other pieces
trying to feel their lives
wondering...
do they feel misshapen too?
i long more than anything
for that blissful ignorance
to forget the fact
i just dont fit
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Author:
SoulTuesday (
Offline) - Published: May 8th, 2017 00:37
- Comment from author about the poem: just my usual late night musings
- Category: Reflection
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Maybe your piece isn't bent it just belongs to a 3D puzzle. You just haven't found the pieces that connect to you yet. I hope you do. Best wishes and hugs.
WELCOME SOUL TUESDAY ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ~ and the enigma it presents ! We are all (more or less) aware of the environment we are in but uncertain of the sppecific niche we fit ! Life is an ecological puzzle ! MANDI is right we re all 3D so finding the fit is harder than adding a "piece" to a 2D jigsaw puzzle ! The trouble is "Life & Love" is dynamic so todays perfect fit ~ can be tomorrows misfit ~ I love the challenge of you Poem ~ more please ! Please check my poems ~ BRIAN (UK)
Great write and welcome to MPS
Nice Poem and welcome to My Poetic Side. 🙂
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