The clouds in my life have always been there,
They brought the sadness that sometimes came into it,
The tears they brought mingled with the rain.
I look back at those clouds in my aging life,
Those clouds have changed,
Changed the way that my life is now.
Those clouds who once brought me rain,
Now just add colour to my sky
As they and I go towards the sunset of my life.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I saw this saying recently and wrote this poem, \\\"Clouds come floating into my life, no longer to carry rain or usher storm, but to add colour to my sunset sky.\\\" the writer of the saying was Rabindranrath Tagore.
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Clouds really do bring beauty to the skies and certainly give me much pleasure - great write.
Thanks Michael, the picture is one of mine by the way, I used to do a great deal of photography and am slowly starting to get back to it.
Well it's a superb picture - you must post more of them.
Oohhh but it's only dawn for us - seeing as we're millions of years old! heehee.
Sensitive write, with hope. Not as if 'Doom and gloom; the end is nigh'.
There is no doom and gloom as I know that I am going to always be with My Spirit.
I have a collection of sunrise and sunset pictures of clouds . I wish this site was more liberal about posting pictures . I love clouds ! At night between the moon and me .Racing thunderstorm clouds on the Prairie . Cottonball clous on a warm summer's day . The calico gray of winter announcing snow is on the way . Clouds YAY !
So agree, clouds can be glorious.
A beautiful write
Thank you WS much appreciated.
Never thought about clouds in that way Goldfinch. Very beautiful.
Thank you WBL. Hope your throat gets better soon.
Little better today, thanks! 🙂
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