First new day....

First new day..


Oh life you've changed.
since we were young.
Brightness, light and.
morning sun.
Days so long.
no end in sight.
Watching stars.
deep into night.
Everything new from.
Near to far.
Discovering what.
And Who we are.
Learning each and.
Every hour.
What is sweet, and what is sour.


  • WriteBeLight

    Nice work P.H.

    • P.H.Rose

      Thanks WBL

    • Goldfinch60

      Good write, I often look back to when things were new, but even with my advancing years I still come across the odd new thing that surprises me.

      • P.H.Rose

        I like you do that,
        With me it is all the
        Time.. maybe a little
        Too much....
        Thanks GF60

      • Michael Edwards

        There is still so much to look forward to if you are a cup-half-full person like me. great write PH

        • P.H.Rose

          Me and you are
          The same...
          I'm a half full type.
          Thank you Michael

        • valene

          I enjoyed the read very much. it has a great flow to it. what you say is so very true...for i'm no longer as young as i once was and this hits home!

          • P.H.Rose

            Thank you valene..
            You have got it
            Spot on...

            • valene

              Nice! :)

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