First new day..
Oh life you've changed.
since we were young.
Brightness, light and.
morning sun.
Days so long.
no end in sight.
Watching stars.
deep into night.
Everything new from.
Near to far.
Discovering what.
And Who we are.
Learning each and.
Every hour.
What is sweet, and what is sour.
- Author: P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: May 18th, 2017 02:45
- Comment from author about the poem: Sat and wrote 3 poems last night. This is the first, about when Everything was new to us..
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 28
Comments4
Nice work P.H.
Thanks WBL
Good write, I often look back to when things were new, but even with my advancing years I still come across the odd new thing that surprises me.
I like you do that,
With me it is all the
Time.. maybe a little
Too much....
Thanks GF60
There is still so much to look forward to if you are a cup-half-full person like me. great write PH
Me and you are
The same...
I'm a half full type.
Thank you Michael
I enjoyed the read very much. it has a great flow to it. what you say is so very true...for i'm no longer as young as i once was and this hits home!
Thank you valene..
You have got it
Spot on...
Nice! 🙂
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