Peekaboopeaches

While the world sleeps

I sit alone while the world sleeps In pure and bliss full slumber eye's closed and lashes to cheeks they dream without number
I sit alone while the world sleeps The night skies I am under from my walls a shadow creeps while in fear I wonder... 

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  • BRIANSODES

    WELCOME PEACHES (LOVE YOUR PEN NAME !) Thanks for your first poem and comment. It is "just right" in length and sentiment ~ lovely ~ more please. Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.

  • Goldfinch60

    Welcome to MPS. Your write says a great deal. Well done for your first one.

  • OUTBACK

    THAT (SHADOW)*=THE QUESTION ? WHAT IS THIS REALITY* ?

    • Peekaboopeaches

      Lol what are you trying to ask or say exactly? I dont quite understand

      • OUTBACK

        NOT* UNDERSTANDING* >IS < WHAT IT'S *ALL ABOUT ! [ THE SHADOW* -THAT IS THE LIGHT ]* TO TRY & UNDERSTAND SUCH* IS NOT AT ALL POSSIBLE nor NECESSARY !

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      • Adadsy

        I love the implied meaning by having the whole poem inside a single lengthy stanza. Wish I thought of that! It’s kinda like how sleep paralysis feels like it lasts for hours when I’m reality it’s only a few seconds. Don’t worry too much about grammar when writing poetry. With poetry I find it’s more about getting the artful flow of words and projecting meaning onto them, which I think you’ve done just fine. It’s not so much as about the hard and fast rules of the English language

      • Peekaboopeaches

        Thank you for your thoughts i very much appreciate them coming from someone with such talent



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