LIMERICK 28
There was a young fellow from Bude
who was often extremely odd.
A pal in his mob
said: ‘Please shut your mouth’
To which he replied: ‘Silly fruit cake!’
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Athelstan and Barrington have now got girlfriends and Cedric finds it quite funny. Plus an unrhyming limerick.
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Ohh, you've refined that limerick so it don't rhyme. Will it be too much for me if I 'translate' it! I might swoon in me sheltered life! heehee. Good write and pic.
Yes -Thought it would be fun to tease a bit - should read thus:
There was a young fellow from Bude
who was often extremely rude.
A pal in his mob
said: ‘Please shut your gob’
To which he replied: ‘Go get screwed.
I looked at the picture
I read every word
Then scratched my head
Then said ,"If it has wings
feathers
flies
It must be a bird
MICHAEL ~ I knew a Man
Whose Limericks they never would scan
When asked why it was ?
He replied its because
I always try to get as many words in the last line as i possibly can !
Thanks for Limericking ~ BRIAN
The visual complements the LIMMY because
It doesn't rhyme either ~ TOUCHE
We're in a rhymless zone - Thanks B
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