My Opposing twin within....

P.H.Rose

    My opposing twin within...

 

You move inside, l feel each pass,
This opposite, reflective mass.
Invade my thoughts, negative play,
I fight for me, be true each day.
Mirror reflection, not recognised,
My mind overtaken, within my side.
No horns, nor tail, or deep disguise,
But exact as me, to my surprise.
Some days you discuss inside my mind,
An opposite thought, I would not find.
Confusion is your favoured mode,
I'll then wonder, an unfamiliar road.
Positivity and love, are my favoured tool,
With those I defeat, your attempted rule....

  • Author: P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 29th, 2017 02:47
  • Comment from author about the poem: My take on a poem by WBL With her kind permission
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Thanks PHR for a Poem that rings a real bell with me.. I had an identical Twin Brother ~ who alas died @ four months ~ so the only real quality time we shared was 9 months in the womb. However I genuinely feel him with me 24/7. Often he agrees with me (we have the same DNA) but sometimes (and in crucial decisions !) He has disagreed ~ and caused me to ponder and rethink. I am so pleased I have a "real twin within" whose GUIDANCE is more precious than GOLD ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Your poem made me sad in memory of JAMES ~ but also very very glad ! B. Please check my POEM (and also a FUSION) on ICE CREAM ~ to suit the Weather ~ Thanks BRIAN

    • P.H.Rose

      Thank you Brian
      For that beautiful
      Comment, although
      Sad also very uplifting
      Thought...

    • Goldfinch60

      Good write. Good always overcomes bad even within our own bodies.

      • P.H.Rose

        Thank you GF60

      • WriteBeLight

        You did such a deep and meaningful job with this P.H. Really hit the mark of what is the real essence of an evil twin wanting to get out. Bravo!

        • P.H.Rose

          Thank you so much
          WBL. Means a lot
          That you liked it..

          • WriteBeLight

            I did. Very much!

          • ShannonXx

            Lovely poem, very meaningful

            • P.H.Rose

              Thank you Shannon..



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