My opposing twin within...
You move inside, l feel each pass,
This opposite, reflective mass.
Invade my thoughts, negative play,
I fight for me, be true each day.
Mirror reflection, not recognised,
My mind overtaken, within my side.
No horns, nor tail, or deep disguise,
But exact as me, to my surprise.
Some days you discuss inside my mind,
An opposite thought, I would not find.
Confusion is your favoured mode,
I'll then wonder, an unfamiliar road.
Positivity and love, are my favoured tool,
With those I defeat, your attempted rule....
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Author:
P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: My take on a poem by WBL With her kind permission
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Thanks PHR for a Poem that rings a real bell with me.. I had an identical Twin Brother ~ who alas died @ four months ~ so the only real quality time we shared was 9 months in the womb. However I genuinely feel him with me 24/7. Often he agrees with me (we have the same DNA) but sometimes (and in crucial decisions !) He has disagreed ~ and caused me to ponder and rethink. I am so pleased I have a "real twin within" whose GUIDANCE is more precious than GOLD ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Your poem made me sad in memory of JAMES ~ but also very very glad ! B. Please check my POEM (and also a FUSION) on ICE CREAM ~ to suit the Weather ~ Thanks BRIAN
Thank you Brian
For that beautiful
Comment, although
Sad also very uplifting
Thought...
Good write. Good always overcomes bad even within our own bodies.
Thank you GF60
You did such a deep and meaningful job with this P.H. Really hit the mark of what is the real essence of an evil twin wanting to get out. Bravo!
Thank you so much
WBL. Means a lot
That you liked it..
I did. Very much!
Lovely poem, very meaningful
Thank you Shannon..
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