Young love....
Daisy chains down lovers lane
When life was oh so new
Beauty all around i felt when holding hands with you
Every smell and every spell
You wove when we were young
Time stood still sat on our hill
On Your every word I hung
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Author:
P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 1st, 2017 16:51
- Comment from author about the poem: it was a long time ago But being young and In love was beautiful I can still remember My first love..
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The heart has reasons that reason knows nothing of . Blase Pascal 1670
Thank you swingline
Youth and love, that's happiness at its peak
Absolutely spot
On..
Thank you
CK
Our young bodies were so alive and responsive. Gettin to know one another. You capture it well
Thank you Augustus
This peels away the years - lovely write PH.
Thank you for that
Wonderful comment
Michael...
Very good write, that first love is always special, so innocent.
Thank you GF60
I just wanted to
Capture the smell
And feel of youth
And love and not
Explain it
A fine write P. Not TOO old there?!
Ha ha.. thank you
Orchidee....
Really enjoyed this
Thank you Shannon
You keep up the
Good work with
Your poetry....
Try doing one really
Left field... about anything
You see..
Thank you and yes I will have to try that
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