Hazelnut brown hair
Cut above your shoulders
Tiny hands
With rings on show
Carrying around your bag and coat
Harsh laugh
Inviting smile
Talking about world issues for a while
Intelligent brain
Intellectual speech
Always trying to make world peace
Warm heart
Stubborn streak
Slightly prolonged stares
To show me she cares
Awkward talks till one of us walks
Her smile was always directed
By her Coffee brown eyes
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Author:
ShannonXx (
Offline) - Published: June 4th, 2017 09:01
- Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this poem for someone who is a friend of mine and means a lot to me.
- Category: Friendship
- Views: 60
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Comments7
Good write S. You writing it about me? Except for 'intelligent'? heehee!
Hahaa yeah obviously 😉 sure you are intelligent
Ohh boo-hoo, did you leave out the 'intellectual' line then, writing abut me?! lol.
Indepth observation of your friend equates to your poetic skills . Ever watchful and observant , always eagle eyed for discernment .
Thank you
What a lovely expression of your friendship so well versed.
Thank you
This is so good Shannon
Just a really good read..
Thank you really appreciated
She knows you care.
I hope so
Good write. Our friends are special people.
Thank you and that is so true
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