MATURITY
Now emerged.
Now exposed.
No more on life’s protected throne
as childhood takes its leave.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: There's been a few thoughtful shorties posted of late so thought I would add to them - plus a watercolour of Venice also painted as a quickie - about 15 minutes actually - would love to return - maybe soon.
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I like how deep the subject is and how you convey it in so few words! Good write!
Thanks Virago
An x-ray on the subject . Nice painting . Take your time next time .
Cheers s - actually it's great working quickly - makes you loosen up - always a good exercise.
Good write and the last line is so meaningful.
Apparently it's a bit wet in Venice I am led to believe. Good artwork.
Thanks G - especially in the canals.
A fine write and pic again M.
Cheers o
As you know by now, I am a big fan of the four line poem, and this is a fine example. Not much of an art critic, but love the poem, Michael!
Ta muchly Louis - I also like couplets although I haven't written any for a little while - must get the pen out.
Perfect poem. You are a great water color artist. Even your quickies are good.
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