Storm - Haiku.

Goldfinch60

Lightning cleaves the sky,

Thunderous rain falls to earth,

Cleansing our dark lives.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 11th, 2017 01:35
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just a thought.
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 25
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  • Frank Prem

    Nicely done GF. Works well.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Frank much appreciated.

    • orchidee

      A fine write G/F.

    • Michael Edwards

      Perfect and complete - great piece.

      • Goldfinch60

        You are very kind Michael, thank you.

      • swingline

        I love thunderpoems .

      • Allan J. Renaldo

        Beautiful

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Allan, much appreciated.

        • Jooles

          Lovely. Rains falling here today

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Jooles. As a Church Minister once said to me "Skin is waterproof."

            • Jooles

              Lol so my kids seem to think

            • Louis Gibbs

              Finally a Haiku that I can fully appreciate. Good work, Goldfinch!

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Louis, much appreciated.

              • Augustus

                Yea, I can use some cleansing. Good one.

              • Heather T

                I love a good Haiku.

              • The Invisible

                Wow good job.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you TI, much appreciated.



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