A hesitant smile spreading slowly from
A corner of her lips across
The whole face getting entangled
In her black hair, lighting it up
To where her eyes, now all krinkly,
Resemble dried raisins in sunshine
Memories of last night turning that
Smile into an infectious delicious giggle
Losing the battle to suppress it
With a ripened tomato red creeping
Up across the cheeks transforming
The giggle into happy laughter
The laughter taking over her whole body
Emanating from deep inside
With belly, breasts, arms, and legs
Wiggling like freshly prodded pudding
Remembering his face
When she said “no”
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Author:
Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 21st, 2017 00:10
- Category: Humor
- Views: 64
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Comments8
Well penned sir - and what a great last line - yes this really appealed to me.
Good write.
Thank you to all of you! I am glad you like it. And as far as subject matter is concerned, it is true, I am kind of all over the place. I usually write a first line and then that mysterious thing called mind simply takes over. Mahalo!
I love poems with a punch line, such as this one. Well done, Fred!
your description is creatively
a gem
I'm a very visual listener, and your words paint a perfect picture. I followed where you took me, and I giggled with her in the end. Wonderful Picture Thank you
Ha ha - - written in such style and with a surprise ending this has to be read again Fred. Into my favs. with this one
Thank you everybody! Your encouragement is very much appreciated.
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