Memories of Last Night

FredPeyer

 

A hesitant smile spreading slowly from

A corner of her lips across

The whole face getting entangled

In her black hair, lighting it up

To where her eyes, now all krinkly,

Resemble dried raisins in sunshine

 

Memories of last night turning that

Smile into an infectious delicious giggle 

Losing the battle to suppress it

With a ripened tomato red creeping

Up across the cheeks transforming

The giggle into happy laughter

 

The laughter taking over her whole body

Emanating from deep inside

With belly, breasts, arms, and legs

Wiggling like freshly prodded pudding

Remembering his face

When she said “no”

  • Author: Alfred Peyer (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 21st, 2017 00:10
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 64
  • User favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm..
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Comments8

  • Michael Edwards

    Well penned sir - and what a great last line - yes this really appealed to me.

  • Goldfinch60

    Good write.

  • FredPeyer

    Thank you to all of you! I am glad you like it. And as far as subject matter is concerned, it is true, I am kind of all over the place. I usually write a first line and then that mysterious thing called mind simply takes over. Mahalo!

  • Louis Gibbs

    I love poems with a punch line, such as this one. Well done, Fred!

  • onepauly

    your description is creatively
    a gem

  • The Broken Vessel

    I'm a very visual listener, and your words paint a perfect picture. I followed where you took me, and I giggled with her in the end. Wonderful Picture Thank you

  • Fay Slimm.

    Ha ha - - written in such style and with a surprise ending this has to be read again Fred. Into my favs. with this one

  • FredPeyer

    Thank you everybody! Your encouragement is very much appreciated.



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