Portrait

malubotelho

She stood there lost on thoughts. Her eyes looked faded like two stars frozen on a gap of time.
Her lips were slightly open resembling two petals of a rosy colored flower. The light shining on her hair created a brilliant crown over her head, turning her slick black hair into a cascade of golden and red tones. She looked so angelic and innocent.
Looking at her young face I felt a deep maternal affection toward her. The pain she was feeling was disturbing me. It sent a confusing agony to my stomach and made me want to take her inside my arms and sing for her. Sing a babyish lullaby of sweet and comforting notes. From that moment on, I knew she was part of my life. I would never let her go from my heart.

  • Author: Malu (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 28th, 2017 13:32
  • Comment from author about the poem: To a young girl that just entered my life but already stole my heart.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 49
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  • malubotelho

    Thank you 😊
    She is my sons girl friend. A sweet darling that I met not long ago.

  • kevin browne

    loving the imagery of your togetherness in this new love you have found and you have captured it magically. great write malubotelho x

  • malubotelho

    Oh! Thank you so much. I the way you put it into your comments. Lovely

  • Michael Edwards

    She is obviously very special and she has obviously found someone very special.

    • malubotelho

      Yes, thanks. This love affair has just begun. I have two sons and have been very luck with they partners.

    • Cyprian Van Dyke

      Beautiful limn! I loved the feeling you conveyed, you could feel the music.

    • malubotelho

      Thanks for reading and commenting.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      THANKS MALU ~ For a lovely ~ love poem ~ not the usual potential Mother in Law ~ Daughter in Law relationship ~ You are lovely. You and your Sons & their Partners are very very Blessed ~ Love to you all ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my DEJA VU Poem ~ Thanks B

    • onepauly

      may the blessings between you and her follow both of you to the future

    • malubotelho

      Thanks dear. Thanks for your blessings.

    • ShannonXx

      This is beautiful and very well expressed

      • malubotelho

        Thanks for reading and appreciating.

      • FredPeyer

        Beautiful writing! You paint such a powerful picture with your words, I can actually see her standing there. And you are very lucky, not every son brings home a gem.

      • malubotelho

        Thanks my friend Fred. Yes, I m indeed.

      • malubotelho

        Thank you. That was the thought. A good description brings you to reality. I could paint her just by reading my writes.

      • meno1972

        Very moving. Touched my heart

      • malubotelho

        Thank you. For reading and comments



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