The torrential June rain
falls as the earth drinks it in.
The sun hides behind the clouds
as if peeking through was a sin.
The wind whistles through the
open window in the next room.
It's beautiful music, a lullaby even.
The culmination of sounds makes me swoon.
But I am anxious for the
clouds to run along and hide.
I want to feel the sun on my skin.
I don't like being stuck inside.
I know warmer temps are
well on their way.
So I will enjoy the delightful
sights and sounds of today.
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 28th, 2017 23:12
- Comment from author about the poem: It has poured all day. Now thunder adds to the symphony of the rain and wind.
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Comments5
lets hope your lovely poem comes true. a nice and soft poem and Its great.
It's still cloudy today, but I really appreciate your wonderful comment!!
june rain,sounds romantic
Yes, it is! Nice to see you!
Good write. Enjoy every day.
Thanks so much GF! I will!
Ohhhhhhhhh CHRIS your poem really lifted me up this morning for three different reasons ! Firstly it is a wonderful and happy pure CHRISTINA S Poem which we have really missed ! Four balanced QUATRAINS with a consistent pattern of Rhyme (xaxa xbxb etc) and Rhythm ~ You are a wonderful Poet Angel !
SECONDLY the SUBJECT ~ The Water Cycle "God touched the CLOUDS made the RAIN from the RAIN formed the SEA ~ from the SEA formed the CLOUDS to give us LIFE abundantly" Like you ANGEL ~ i love the Rain because it means God''s Water Cycle is active !
THIRDLY even though we are separated by time (6 hours) and space (4000 miles !) it rained on both our Parades (we had the Norfolk Country Show & Tennis !) yesterday ! Also some of the raindrops that fill the Great Lakes cycle round to water my MOM's Garden in the same week awesome !
Lovely to have you back in Body ~ Mind & Spirit ~ keep them coming ~ your poems always ameliorate (good word) MPS ~ Rain Drop Hugs ~ BRIAN
I deeply appreciate your wonderful comments Brian! You put so much thought into them and I like that! I don't know if I can write everyday but I shall make an effort. Still no sunshine today but this reply put a smile on my face. Hugs--Christina
Hugs from belfast where it is ALWAYS rainning. I certainly feel your poem today. Lovely ❤
Thanks so much Renzi! I am still waiting for the sun to come out. I appreciate your wonderful comment!
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