Walk through thought.
I walk through time
A life laden line
A simple stroll
Through centuries old
Along a path not true
Between burn and yew
The sun's warmth welcome
The nights cold seldom
Natures offspring beauty
Mans abject cruelty
On stranger tides a loves view
Days long pride all hopes ensue
This moment making madness
A lifetime to regret.
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Author:
P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (
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Fine poetic comparison with well chosen phrasing to describe a walk through time-laden thought - I so enjoyed the slant of this read Tony - -
Thank you Fay
Who's Tony ??
oh dear me -- ha ha - so so sorry my friend - I had just made a comment under Tony's posting and must have been swept so far away by the depth in your poem that I lost direction........ please accept my apology P.H.
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Super write Alice. Alice? Alice? who the f***s Alice? LoL - Haven't we all done it? I certainly have - sorry Fay!
Ha ha brilliant Michael
Thank you for the comment
Very good write.
Thank you GF60...
My poem tomorrow is
Completely different
But set in another place
Where my thoughts
Take over..
Brilliant poem, very descriptive. I love how the words just flow....
Thank you Chrissy
For that super comment
Today's offering is a bit
Of fun but something I do.
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