Ignored
That's how I felt
One day you were around
Then you became someone else
Treated me like a stranger
Like I meant nothing
You said you cared, you loved me
But only left me in confusion
I didn't know where we stood
Always hot and cold
One minute being so kind, then so cruel
No reason, nothing explained
Acted as if I was fine, as if nothing hurt
I didn't want to give you the satisfaction of tearing up my little world
You seemed to enjoy seeing me suffocate in pain
Constantly making me jealous, rarely speaking my name
How can someone change this much
From exchanging words of love
To becoming invisible, like floating dust
Only noticed for insults or fights
I felt so weak, nothing went right
You would never say sorry
Or accept your mistakes in light
Entirely stubborn
You would only deny
I eventually gave up
I couldn't argue with lies
You never stuck around or soothed away my cries
Abandoned me like my friends
Even at 'Prom night'
We never spoke things through
Left numb and blue
'Things got too deep'
Was the only explanation given
Not even from you
I had to de-attach, had to say goodbye
I knew you'd still be around
But my feelings would have to die
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This is very good Shannon
By the sounds of it you
Are well rid......
Youth and romance
A sometimes
Toxic mixture!!!!!!
Thank you so much! and I agree aha
All that glitters is not always Gold. You turn emotion into art so well. I agree with DSKS your writing is getting better and better x
Thank you! The comment means a lot 🙂 x
As Neil Sedaka said long before your time: Breaking up is hard to do...
You are saying it so much more eloquently. Love the last line "But my feelings would have to die". "Would have to..." is the key. They (the feelings) don't "want to". To me, this last line of only seven well chosen words is the key to the whole poem. Wonderful writing Shannon!
Thank you! Yes I agree with your point, my feelings didn't want to go but had to
I felt this poem like a give up from your heart. Some times it is better this way. It is always another path to take, another love to make.
Yes it was kind of like that but in some situations you do need to give up I guess. Thanks for the comment
One day, the right someone will not. Lovely share, beauty.
Thank you! 🙂
Good emotive write. Move on there is someone out there for you.
Thanks! And I hope so
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