Beyond Existence.

Goldfinch60

Into space you look,

You know they are out there

But can you see them.

Can you see the darkness of them?

Or are they so dark

That they are invisible.

All that reach their boundaries

Disappear without trace.

So could it be true,

That Black Holes

Crush all life,

All thoughts,

And all memories,

Beyond existence?

 

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 3rd, 2017 01:48
  • Comment from author about the poem: On a television programme a couple of days ago I heard somebody say that black holes crush everything beyond existence so it inspired me to write about it.
  • Category: Reflection
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  • Michael Edwards

    I've read about, seen programmes about them and understand the theory yet still I find it hard to grasp the concept of them - great write G.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Michael, one of life's great mysteries.

    • Renzi

      Eeek black holes. Now there's a conversation you'd need to make a cuppa tea and perhaps cancel your days plans to have with me. So intriguing. I'm off to google now ha! Great wee write 💓

      • Goldfinch60

        Thanks Renzi, the cuppa tea will be waiting.

      • burning-embers

        They sure nuff aint crushing your life and memories.
        But dont get sucked in its only a theory that they exist. I wont believe it till the search party comes back.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thanks b-e, I wouldn't mind being part of that search party . Live long and prosper!

          • burning-embers

            I dont recommend it. The last five 'lets find us a black hole' search parties never came back. I fancy finding Big Foot though, he trampled my tomato plants.

          • orchidee

            Yes, they crush all in existence. You'll find them on 'Neighbours' where all life has left - oohh, it left centuries ago now! heehee.

            • Goldfinch60

              Never did find neighbours.

              • orchidee

                Phew! just as well it's disappeared into a black hole. Too horrific to watch on telly!

              • onepauly

                the black hole gets smaller and smaller. then disappears into oblivion. then theres an explosion.
                I don't know what happens after that.

                • Goldfinch60

                  I'll let you know when I go looking for one!

                  • onepauly

                    I would appreciate it.



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