The pain I go through is unexplainable, this continuous pain
The breaking of my heart is getting more frequent
It's getting harder and harder to be strong
The warmness of my heart is fading by the day
I feel the coldness taking over and I can't stop it
Is it wrong that I don't want to stop it?
That I want to become cold hearted so things won't hurt me anymore
I want to be ruthless and careless
I want to be spiteful and take from those who took from me
Is it really wrong that I feel this way?
Is it wrong that these thoughts cloud my mind daily?
Or am I right to feel the way I so truly do?
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Author:
Lost Girl (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: These are my deepest thoughts and they constantly come to my mind at least once a day and I’m just looking for an outlet to get these feelings out.... comment your honest opinions please
- Category: Reflection
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Good strong write. Welcome to MPS and as with many of us on this site we find that putting our thoughts, fears and emotions into words can help transform us for the better. May your words flow from your body and start to bring back warmth to your heart.
Thank you I really appreciate it!
A very emotional and well written poem. Congratulations and welcome to our forum.
Regarding the questions at the end of your poem, please read "A Father's Love" Ruth Fadairo posted yesterday.
In one of her stanzas she writes:
I've learned to be more forgiving,
More sympathetic,
More emphatic,
For I cannot let the damage you've caused,
Invade my entire life you see.
Very good advice for a broken heart I think.
But then, what do I know, I am just an old man 🙂
Thank you for reading I really appreciate it!
Life is toughening you up for what lies ahead. Just don't let it rob you of the inner beauty. Nice poem, Lost Girl. Keep writing!
Thank you for reading and your support!
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