Yesterday was adventurous,
I got a new front tooth.
The things we do for beauty,
And hang on to our youth.
I had a temporary thing before,
For a few weeks just ofcorse.
And no word of a lie,
I felt like a bloody horse.
But back to this new nasher,
All new and fresh ka-ching.
Now i must take great care
and stop falling over everything.
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Author:
Renzi Mars (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 5th, 2017 03:19
- Comment from author about the poem: Just documenting my life as i go along. With rhyme, a pinch of humour today and that cheesy / creepy smile picture. Happy wednesday. *little smile*
- Category: Short story
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Comments6
Incisive incisor humour, love your stuff.. was that pic taken upside down? have u seen upsidedowndogs.com ? there are some lovely front teeth on there.
Trying to master the selfie, master the self haha! I'll have a wee look. Might get some smile inspiration there!!
Good fun right, may your tooth bite into some tasty morsels.
Currently eating jelly beans *life update* haha ❤
Loved this write, simple but meaningful, excellent!
Awh thankyou * little smile*
Nice little thing you wrote here. And judging from the picture you don't need to worry about your new tooth in case you fall. Are those "crash bars" on either side?
Crash bars haha, i need them.. or bubble wrapped. So very accident prone tut tut!
Another fine poem, Renzi! it brought a smile.
Awk thankyou Louis ❤
Gave me a smile and love your smile plus new tooth - and lovely eyes too which I guess are originals 🙂
Awhhh why thankyou.. i was definitely born with these peepers 👀😂
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