Help.
Im drowning.
Not in water, but in pain
No scars, nor bruises
Just sadness inside my body frame.
I hopelessly stare at my reflection
My heads empty from my minds rejection.
Inside im begging for help.
Silent cries wont get me help.
Hear me.
Here I am.
Help.
Im drowning.
Not in water, but in pain
Please help me to feel sane.
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Author:
S.louise (
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This is a truly relate-able S.Louise, i really enjoyed reading your work
Thankyou R.A 🙂
So deep and so real.
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A very emotional cry for help, and so well written!
Thank you for your comment
Writing gives me such release. I hope it is so for you too. You will always find a 'ready ear' on this site and some very interesting, thought provoking writings.
Writting has always helped me in dark times. Thank you for your comment
WELCOME LOUISE ~ Thanks for your first poem. . Well crafted and replete with Rhyme & Rhythm ! The subject PAIN is SAD but FAMILIAR because it is something we can all relate to. My experience (of pain) thankfully is excruiating but short ! Thinking of you ~ Praying for you ~ BRIAN (UK)
Thankyou for commenting with kind words
Great job! Almost anyone can get rhyme and rhythm but you have such great voice in your writing. I hope things are looking up for you.
Thank you for your kind words 🙂
I loved this it's to the point and relatable !
Thankyou for reading
Good emotive write, may your pain soon subside.
Thank you for reading
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